Twice underneath maths,
There wasn’t a fat she male called Josh. She didn’t eat donuts or Euans from the duck pond, and she most certainly didn’t like guys or females he/she liked his soft teddy bear named Renob. He/she would not do anything for Renob. One day Renob started choking on a grape, so Josh started throwing Renob around the room trying to free Renob from the terrible curse of choking. But all that did was lodge the grape further in his throat. The next day was Renob’s Funeral. The service lasted 2 whole minutes before Josh stated pole dancing on the coffin. Josh lived a very happy life until he got sucked into a worm hole that opened into another dimension 30 seconds later. The End
2 Comments
Mrs Carter
13/4/2013 10:19:09 pm
Will, I do like the level of creative silliness you have placed into this story. You have included a story arc, but the whole story feels rushed and like you haven’t thought about the story’s plot before writing this. Next time try planning a series of event and then writing the story. This will make it feel more like something you would read in a book. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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